Feedback from class teacher

 So we showed sir the raw draft of our films. Overall sir told us that it was a good effort however he did tell us to correct somethings. For Instance he told us to decrease the use of the same sound and add a variety of different sound scores which create the suspense instead of creating the drama. Furthermore he told us to add some effects such as in the library in the entity's POV shot we should add a blur effect or distorted effect and color grade it to  to show the entity's view. Furthermore he told us that whenever we show a flashback we should add the flashing effect to add more cinematography to it. With these improvements we will hopefully be able to improve our product.